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Poor, Poor Judy

Summary:

Detective Hopps is sent to a rural, majority predator province far from Zootopia to investigate suspicious disappearances of a number of prey animals. if nothing else, she certainly finds out what happened to them.

this is a fic that I published a while ago. at the time I didn't have a good sense of how to do things on this site, or how I wanted to publish work. I didn't update it, because it wasn't quite right. this is a slightly revised version, which I plan to update more.

the story features practically every extreme, taboo kink you can think of, and it will likely turn off most people. that's alright, I just don't want you commenting saying you were disgusted, because I've warned you. only proceed if you're a properly warped person, and you want to hear every brutal, messy, cruel detail.

Notes:

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Chapter 1: A lead

Chapter Text

“Rabbit” a gruff voice barked from across the room. Judy looked up from her coffee, to see a large, middle-aged wolf entering the diner. “You really a cop?” He asked as he walked over to her. He was grinning, in Fact, he almost seemed like he was about to laugh, but there was something malicious about his tone. Judy knew she wasn’t welcome here. Being welcome wasn’t part of her job. But still, she couldn’t help but be intimidated by many of the locals in these parts. She tried to keep her head up, and avoid eye contact, but she could feel the accusatory heat of his stare burning into the back of her head. The waiter, along with a few patrons watched as she composed herself, trying to think of an agreeable sounding response.

“Yes, I’m an officer.” She responded, calmly.

“Well shit” the wolf chuckled. “Where are you from? I mean, I know they’d never let a little bunny girl be a cop ‘round here, that’s for sure.” He remarked. He reached out with one hand, and patted judy’s head. Only the hand lingered, disturbing and obvious. he  began to stroke Judy’s ears. She cursed herself as they involuntarily twitched away from his touch. He continued to idly pet her head as he spoke. “You know, I admire your confidence.” a couple of onlookers laughed. “No! Seriously!” he exclaimed, holding back laughter himself. “But isn’t a pretty little thing like you a little…” he pinched her ear between two claws, eliciting a yelp. “out of place, in a town like this?”

He wasn’t wrong, Judy thought. As she looked around the diner, she saw mostly canines and foxes, and all predators. They watched with mild interest, but didn’t seem concerned at all by the wolf’s behavior. “Look at me when I’m talking to you!” The wolf snapped, loudly, bringing his hand to her chin and forcing her face up to meet his gaze for the first time. He was much angrier now that she’d ignored his question. She heard a cold, sharp laugh to her left, and noticed another wolf had joined the first. This one was a little younger, but equally tall and muscular. “What do you think, Joe?” The first wolf asked him. “Does she think she’s better than us or something?”

“That’s not it at all-“ Judy pleaded, quickly being cut off. The wolf forced her mouth shut with one hand.

“I don’t know… it sort of seems like you’re out of line here, prey”, he said, mocking her, before turning back to his friend.

“Some big city cop comes out to our town, thinks she can solve our problems for us? What a bitch”. Commented the younger wolf. He had taken out his phone, and was filming the altercation.

“Fellas!” The waiter, a young dog yelled from behind the counter. “Can’t you take this to the back room or something? This is a family restaurant”. His tone was funny, almost casual, but Judy knew that it implied something dark.

“Shut up, Cole”, the wolf yelled back, not breaking eye contact with Judy. He leaned in closer to her. “It ain’t no secret I don’t like these uppity prey bitches. aint no secret either what I do to ‘em” His broad, fanged muzzle was mere inches from hers, and she could feel his hot breath on her face as he talked. Suddenly, he let go of her, and she instinctively pushed herself away, further back into the booth, with her back pressed against the window. A few more carnivores watched with amusement from outside. She knew it was wrong to show fear, but she knew, deeper down, in some primal place, that it was more important to put distance between herself and the wolf.

Judy watched in horror as he casually slid into the booth beside her, continuing until his body was pressed up against hers. He leaned into her, holding her in place and beginning to explore her body with his hands. His friend sat down across from them, and giggled, still filming.

“Holy shit, i knew those prey faggots in the big city were dumb, but I never thought they’d send a rabbit cop after us.” The horror of the sentence struck her immediately. The wolf, whose hand was on her breast, undoing the buttons of her shirt felt her heart begin to pound at the same time that she did as the depth of her predicament sank in. She had come to find the reason for all of the prey disappearances in this province, and something told her that she had found exactly what she was looking for. 

She felt one cold, hard claw brush against the skin in between her breasts, then trace its way over to a nipple, teasing and scratching.
“Did they tell you what happened to the others?” The wolf asked, almost whispering, with his wet nose pressed up against Judy’s ear, gently, sensually kissing her. “Do they know?”
Judy noticed a proper crowd was forming out the window. One dog stared down at her, making eye contact and rubbing a growing bulge in his pants. He crouched down to eye level and tapped on the glass, watching her squirm and struggle against the wolf’s hands.

The wolf grinned ghoulishly into the camera of his friend’s phone. “If you retards in Zootopia ever see this, let it be a lesson. Don’t send the office fleshlight-” he slapped Judy’s face, and tears began to roll from her eyes, “to do a meat-eater’s job.”

A few parents were covering their children’s eyes, or leaving the diner entirely. They knew what was coming next just as well as Judy did. Still, many of the customers were neutral, or even intrigued by the potential show. “Does anybody have some rope?” The wolf asked the crowd. He began to roughly, violently drag Judy out of the booth, picking her up and slamming her down face-first on the bar. She struggled and kicked, but he held her body down pinning her arms behind her back with one hand, simultaneously leaning down to nibble on her ear. His breath on her neck made her shiver. Someone - maybe the waiter - bound her forearms together with cord. The wolf slid one hand down her side, pulling down her pants and stroking her thigh with one motion, then pulling his hand back up, ruffling her fur, and cupping her pussy from behind with his enormous hand. Judy could feel the warmth of it even through her panties as he groped her, then started to tear at the underwear with one claw. Slowly, playfully at first, then harder and harder, scratching at her sensitive skin. With a flourish of his hand, he pulled through the last thread, and let the tattered underwear slide off her, falling to the floor. He began to rub her clit, noticing the wet spot that had formed as he groped her. He brought his hand up to her mouth, and rubbed it on her face, along her lips and nose, smearing the symbol of her shame across her face.

“Tastes good, don’t it?” He breathily moaned into her ear. “You can’t hide it from us. All of you little meat girls love it. You can’t fucking resist the appeal of submitting to your real masters.” He painfully dragged out every word. “You can’t help but know your natural place” He added, forcing his soaked fingers into her mouth.

The younger wolf shoved the phone in her face and she stared into the camera, sobbing uncontrollably. She wanted to be strong, to look unphased and resilient, but it just wasn’t how she felt. The wolf laid his head on top of hers, and held her face forwards, towards the camera by her chin. “Can you Tell us your name, sweet thing?” He drawled, grinning at the camera. She couldn’t bring herself to talk. She bawled loudly, sniffling and closing her eyes in shame.

“J-ju… judy…”

“Judy what?” The wolf snapped, suddenly slapping her ass and making her yelp.

“Judy… h-hopps” she managed to get out.

“And whyyyyyy are you here?” He drew out the word with gleeful cruelty.

“To f-find * sob to find out… what happened… to sob to the prey animals that disappeared here.”

“Oh baaaby…” the wolf cooed, almost lovingly. “We can teach you AALLLLL about that”.

“She wanna know what we do to disobedient meat ‘round here” the other wolf snickered.

“Well, what do you say we show her?” The older one asked, this time to the whole diner. Before even getting an answer, he started to work. Judy felt a hot, hard object flop down on her ass. It reached halfway up her back, and she felt a slimy dribble of precum leak out onto her fur as he started rubbing it against her, moaning deeply to himself.

“Do me a favor and hold her down, Joe” he moaned quietly. His eyes were closed, and his face was pointed up at the ceiling in almost religious pleasure. Judy felt his hand leave, replaced by another, pressing down on her back, and restricting her breathing. The younger wolf kneeled down, so he was at eye level with her, and began to nuzzle her face. He kissed her, forcing his tongue into her mouth, savoring every scream and pathetic whimper, and licking the tears from her face the way a mother cat would her child. With every kiss, he made sure to press his face in deep, so she could feel the enormous, hard fangs lurking just behind his lips.

She felt the wolf’s hands run down her body, settling on her hips, and playfully pressing on her asshole. Her legs trembled in anticipation of the incredible pain she knew was coming. She flinched and squealed as the wolf let a thick glob of saliva drip from his mouth down to her tight, virgin hole. He relished watching her struggle, her fat little ass shaking feebly in his hands. He briefly considered taking a bite out of it, beginning her torture right there, and savoring the raw, fresh, fatty meat of her hind quarters, but he knew that they would have plenty of time for that. 

He knelt down by her ass, and began to rim her. The rabbit’s breath caught in her throat as she felt the cold, wet, slimy tongue probing her hole, but she couldn’t protest with the other wolf’s mouth locked to hers. She felt an unfamiliar, disgusting feeling, accompanied by a dull pain as the tongue breached her ass. Her rapist moaned in exaggerated, mocking ecstacy, and slid his maw forward, brushing her pussy with his teeth, and causing her hole to clench around him. Satisfied, he slid his tongue out, and stood back up.

“I thought rabbits were all sex- fiends!” He exclaimed. “But you… your asshole is completely untouched. you poor thing.” He reached down and slid his hand under her torso, pinching one nipple, and watching with delight as her hole tensed in response.

The other wolf stood up too, and Judy moaned, panting for breath as he finally let go of her mouth. He grasped her chin, and made her look up at him.
“Any predators ever use your throat before, sweetheart?” He asked. She tenderly shook her head, which seemed to excite him. He pulled out his cock, and laid it down on her face. “Now those little buck teeth are cute, carrots, but if I feel a single one of them, you’re fucking dinner.” He brandished a knife from the counter as he said this, sliding the blunt side along her face, as he slapped her face with his meaty cock.

She was almost comforted by the threat, in a strange way. It seemed to imply that if she obeyed, and gave him what he wanted, she might have a chance to live. But before she could ponder that possibility any further she felt an incredible pain in her ass, as the wolf’s member started to press against her hole. One hand settled on her tiny waist, almost reaching all of the way around it as he held his prey in place. The other spread one cheek open, so he could get a view of her tiny rectum stretching far more than it ever had as it engulfed the tip of his cock. Her scream was muffled by the other wolf’s cock, but he could very easily sense her pain. Her legs kicked uselessly against the bar, hanging multiple feet off the ground. The waiter, now visibly annoyed, scowled at the two men, as he squeezed behind one wolf on his way behind the counter.

“Jesus christ, you guys are gonna make a fucking mess!” He growled. “Can you at least not snuff her in here when you’re done?” He begged. “My boss will kill me if I have to clean up another herbivore’s brains.”

“Can you just give a man a Break?” The older wolf moaned, lost in ecstasy as he pushed further into Judy’s body. “Besides,” he grinned, “you guys can keep some of the meat once we’re done with her”. He slapped Judy’s ass, holding on this time, and digging in his claws, drawing faint pinpricks of blood as he squeezed. Judy shrieked like never before, causing the younger wolf to moan, and flex his cock inside her throat, pushing deeper as her voice-box vibrated and spasmed.

“Good fucking girl” he exhaled, slamming his hips towards her face. A stream of snot blew from her nose and trickled down the base of his cock, joining the strings of drool that were already forming underneath her chin, and matting down the thick fur of the wolf’s balls. “You’re not going to believe how tender this bitch’s throat is,” he told his friend. He held his hand over her nose, and felt her throat contract around him in vulgar, desperate peristalsis, trying in vain to swallow whatever obstruction was preventing her breathing, and milking his cock. Finally, just as her vision started to darken, he pulled his entire length out, letting it hang in front of her, connected by hundreds of thin strings of mucus. “You were made for this, do you understand that? This is what you fucking exist for. It’s the way of things for stupid little rabbit couples to pump out baby after baby, so that you can die on our cocks.” He rubbed his tip on her face, smearing a disgusting, foamy slurry of snot, saliva and precum over her as his cock hung limply. She panted and made unintelligible animal sounds.

“She can’t hear a thing, dude” he laughed, still stroking his cock and looming over her. “I think we already broke her brain!”

“I’m not so sure” his older companion mused. “You may have shocked her, but she’s not quite finished yet.” His cock was only halfway into her ass, but he slid it out, letting it hang in the air for a moment, before grabbing onto the tiny herbivore’s hips, and ramming it into her pussy. It immediately went in halfway, stopped by the entrance to her cervix. Every time he bottomed out in her cunt she sobbed, and her body spasmed around him. He lowered his hips, slowly pushing against her cervix. He pressed his ear up against her head, and pushed harder, savoring her primal shrieking. Finally, his cock slid in all the way to the base, stretching her cervix out around it. She slumped forward, silent. He pulled her head up. “Are you still in there, honey?” He affectionately asked, mashing his monstrous snout against her face with almost genuine seeming affection, nibbling and licking. He slowly, methodically popped his head in and out of her womb. “I’m almost sorry to ruin you, little thing, but it’s just your place.” He moaned. “If you can’t take your owner’s cock, I guess I've gotta break you in.” He waited for a response.

“Anything?” He asked. Judy sputtered, and began to whine. “Use your words baby girl. Come on now. I know you’re still with us.”

“Pleathe…” she mumbled. “I d-don’t…”

“What’s that? Sweetheart? Make sure the camera can hear you” he chided. Suddenly, she burst into tears.

“I DON’T WANT TO DIE” she wailed.

“mmmmmmmhhhh…” the predator moaned. “I’m sorry baby, but it’s just what little snacks like you are for. I’m here to eat…” he punctuated his sentence with a pause, pulling his cock almost all the way out, then slamming it in one more time. “And you’re here to be food.” He said calmly, over her wailing.

“I think I’m gonna cum” he grunted to his friend. The movement oh his hips slowed, as he neared orgasm, savoring her shivering, broken body.

“Me too” the other said. He grabbed judy by the mouth, and furiously stroked his cock, pointing the tip at her face. He made eye contact with her as he did, and she could see the sadistic pleasure in his eyes. He came first, shooting his load all over her face, but mostly into her mouth. He pulled as much as he could of the sticky, mucousy film from his cock, and rubbed it into her face, along with the cum, which was now leaking from her mouth and nose, falling from her chin in long strings.

The other wolf put his hands on her back and pressed his full weight down into her as he finished inside of her, moaning and grunting obscenely. Thin, hot lines of saliva dripped onto her from his gaping maw. She felt his body shudder for a moment, before he slowly released her, sliding his cock out of her raw, abused pussy. A long line of cum followed it, dripping down her leg. The wolf slapped her ass one more time, making her yelp, but she was too tired to struggle. She watched uncaringly, almost from outside her body as the larger wolf grabbed her by the ankles, sliding her off of the counter and slinging her limp frame over his shoulder in one fluid motion. She saw, in quick upside-down flashes, the faces of the patrons as they returned to their meals, and the waiter, wiping up any trace of her presence. Her head hit the bed of a pickup truck, and her vision went black.

 

She awoke lying in the bed of a truck. The cold fall wind rushed over her naked body. She had evidently been laying there for quite some time, because her body heat had been entirely sapped. The wolves’ semen was now a solid crust, soaked into her fur. She was past the point of shivering, simply momentarily convulsing against her bonds every few seconds. She was hogtied, and completely unable to move. 

She noticed, as she struggled to sit up, that the truck was moving over gravel, and slowing down. She began to think of ways to determine her location, but just as she began the truck stopped abruptly. Both doors opened, and slammed shut . The older wolf opened the tailgate, and she was surprised to see that he was naked, save a sheep’s skin around his shoulders, and a large decorative necklace of sinew with carved bone talismans. His thick gray coat rustled in the wind, and she drew back as he flashed a toothy grin at her. 

 

“Why don’t we take you inside and show you the den?”

 

Notes:

still working some of the details out, let me know if you have anything you think I should include. for instance, I'm not sure how they'll actually finish her off yet... I was thinking they could both fuck her brain until she goes limp. or just tear into her and eat her alive. that's what I usually go for, since it's the messiest. so anyway, I'd love to hear your suggestions! the more fucked up the better.