Comment on Cloud Seeding - Diana

  1. Ranaspel Sun 19 Jun 2016 05:56PM UTC

    I rather like Diana. ;) Excellent job on keeping the story in the present, it would be very easy to flip back and forth from present to past but it wouldn't flow as well as it does.

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    1. ErlenmeyerKat Sun 19 Jun 2016 07:34PM UTC

      Thank you! I purposely made her extra-bitchy, which isn't the most popular, but let me play with a viewpoint of all of the boys and their backgrounds that wasn't just straight-out narration / repetition of the game or fluff. I kinda like villains with good motivation.

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      1. Ranaspel Mon 20 Jun 2016 04:38AM UTC

        Not sure what it says about me that I didn't find her all that incredibly bitchy. No wait, I can guess. >;D

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